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What You Are Saying
Jewel Bug - Stunning! Nicely done! Colors make me think of a mermaid goes to Festival. ~Heather

Bench in Pink - Carol...breathtaking photos. I so love pink and this one made me swoon. Thanks ~ML

Seer - I think this picture is fantastic. I love the lighting from the crystal ball. Also the jewelry really adds character to the outfit. This seer is in deep thought using her supernatural insight to see what the future holds. ~Matthew

A Direct Flight - Visualized the scene, the moment, the feeling so much in so few words. Enjoyed your story tremendously! Thank you. ~Flash Writer

One More Tomorrow - I cried through the last half of Toni's beautiful tale. Enough said. ~Geri B.

One More Tomorrow - Sad but beautiful story. ~Glory

Wood Thrush - This kept me reading. I did get a bit lost with Paul at first - thought he was a second husband she never technically married at first - but it cleared up. I love how little bits of other family members' personalities showed up in each character. ~E.

Woodcut - Loved this. Especially the first lines. These words resonated like poetry: 'scanning' 'opening' 'fold up' 'fell'. And the contrasting, but merging, colors of 'chestnut' and 'wheat'. ~Myra

Aziz as My Babysitter - What a cute story of a childhood memory revisited through adult eyes. ~Janet

Flight - Superb. A beautiful story vividly described. ~Jenny

Flight - The alps, the sky...beautiful. ~Rosanne

Flight - Thank you for this insight to a special moment in your life. ~Susan

Saying Good-Bye - A loving and well written tribute to your 'Gabby'. This is an honest portrayal of family love in the final stage. My compliments to you. ~Phyllis M.

Saying Good-Bye - A great tribute to your mother ~Susan

Stalking John - Love it! I can feel you, dear heart. Job well done! xxxx ~peggy

A Summer Morning With Van Gogh - Wonderfully written by Sunil Sharma...Van Gogh feel the summer from the cell. images beautifully scripted. ~Dev Dutt

Cloud Circus - Beautifully expressed. I can see all of it! Thanks! ~ML

Cloud Circus - I loved your images, I could feel that sunshine! ~Teffy

Convergence - Sounds just like my Cape Cod Septembers at sunset. Lovely! ~ML

Mockingbird Remix - Very nice ink ~Martin